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  $14.95 ($16.95 Canada) Trade Paperback • 6" x 9" ISBN 978-1-61035-178-2
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              21 Steps to the Clear Prose Publishers and Agents Crave
  by Don McNair
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        Don McNair here.  I’ve edited for others for more than 40 
years, and I now reveal all I’ve learned in the  book below.  I 
hope you enjoy it!
        
        
        
Most writers, especially unpublished ones, suffer from 
"foggy writing" — writing that’s full of extra, misused, and 
overused words. Foggy writing drives editors crazy and 
often makes publishers and agents reject manuscripts at 
first glance. Most writers toil their whole lives without ever 
getting published, and foggy writing is often the reason.
I lay out an easy, systematic method for defogging your 
writing and getting the sales you deserve in my new book, 
Editor-Proof Your Writing: 21 Steps to the Clear 
Prose Publishers and Agents Crave.
I found that most writers make the same mistakes over 
and over again. More importantly, I learned all those 
mistakes can be corrected by removing specific words. 
Eliminating them strengthens action, shortens sentences, 
and makes writing crackle with life.
Other writers have told me that Editor-Proof Your 
Writing is the most practical guide to prose style ever 
written. Traditional style books give vague examples of 
mistakes to avoid, writers to imitate, or at best an 
empirical list of do's and don’t's. Editor-Proof Your 
Writing does much more. It won’t just make you a clearer 
writer; it will make you a better writer — more readable, 
more entertaining, and more likely to sell your work.
Editor-Proof Your Writing teaches 21 simple, 
straightforward principles that show how to edit weak verb 
forms, strip away author intrusions, ban redundancies, 
eliminate foggy phrases, correct passive voice sentences, 
slash misused and overused words, and correct other 
writing mistakes. Following the 21 steps will help you edit 
your own work to produce sparkling, clear, powerful copy 
that attracts readers, agents, editors, and sales.
The audience for this book includes professional and 
aspiring fiction and nonfiction writers, writing teachers and 
students, business professionals--anyone who wants to 
write with more clarity and expression.
About the Author: I've worked as a magazine editor, a 
senior account executive for a major PR firm, and an 
independent PR consultant. I've written five novels, a book 
of short stories, three nonfiction books, and countless 
feature articles for periodicals.  For more on my 
background, click here.  
You can find out more on the pages listed below.
         
        
        “McNair offers great 
editing tips that will be 
sure to strengthen 
your manuscript!”
--USA Today Bestselling 
Author Cynthia Eden
        
        
        
        “All writers, seasoned 
or newbie, should 
read, absorb, and put 
to use the lessons 
Don McNair offers . . .”
        
        New York Journal
of Books
        
        
        
        "Don McNair's 
Editor-Proof Your 
Writing is the perfect 
workshop-in-a-book for 
fiction writers, and a 
must-have for any 
beginner."
~~New York Times 
bestseller Dianna Love
        
        
        
          
            
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